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      1. SIR bored
        SIR bored
        20 October 2022 04:33
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        This is actually the best thing i have ever read here 

        God i love this

      2. B
        BDE= Big Dick Energy
        20 October 2022 09:30
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        It would’ve been better if all the pages were in color 

      3. s
        sexyjoshe
        4 August 2024 09:02
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        Delightful! The changes were subtle and worthwhile, and you did so with great respect to the original. I appreciate that you got forview's blessing, as well. If you're still working on re-inking the art, I look forward to seeing it, and if not, thank you for the excellent work!
      4. H
        Here for the plot
        29 March 2025 01:53
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        I prefer original much much much better. The original version was a masterpiece in "show not tell" story telling, and you have absolutely obliterated that aspect. The added boxes with the characters thoughts are especially egregious, they insult the readers intelligence with constant redundant information, contain eyerolling stereotypical porn talk, and greatly harm the immersion that the original had.
        I have some similar gripes to the changes to the regular dialog.

        Now for the positives. The way you changed the formatting of the panels is a straight improvement to the original. The changes to dialog sperate from its content are also pretty good (font sizes ect). The coloration, and reworked drawings are good as well.

        If this were to be finished one day, I would really like a re-remaster with at least the thought boxes removed. They really are quite terrible.

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