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      1. Q
        Question
        21 February 2021 02:56
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        Ah yes the first book is complete after months of waiting now to enjoy ( hopefully)



        Update not what I expected but still good 
        Plot : interesting and leaves room to grow 
        Structure: alittle sloppy in some areas but nothing unforgivable like THLJ
        Intimate scenes: Decent nothing ground breaking but nothing the will leave you sick after seeing it
        Characters: interesting if a little flat but it's the first book so not a far critic as of yet
        Conclusion: as of now it's above average as the final critic can only be given if and when finished
        1. c
          conclusion
          21 February 2021 04:40
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          judgemental
        2. Kaspioxcz
          Kaspioxcz
          22 February 2021 15:06
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          Damm i never seen such an awesome made comment on porn site
        3. Juice Tank
          Juice Tank
          23 February 2021 03:04
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          Interesting critique. I would just like to add a few things.
          I agree with your comments on the plot and characters.
          Dialogue is a bit monotone, meaning it's either exposition/flashback or it's boring sentences (mainly in sex scene, but I don't know any comics that do dialogoue good in the act), because of that dialogue is why characters seem so bland and 1 dimensional.
          But nothing too crazy. Critique stands.
          And also art style is beautiful, not too detailed, but not that bland, so it's really pretty.
          Overall good comic, and would like to see more.
      2. I
        Iiiiii
        21 February 2021 07:06
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        Zuko x cabbage man
      3. A
        Answer
        21 February 2021 07:31
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        What is THLJ?
      4. U
        Ur12
        21 February 2021 09:22
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        Were is the avatar 

        1. I
          Iron Man
          21 February 2021 12:11
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          I'll do you one better, who's the Avatar?
      5. D
        Drax
        21 February 2021 17:25
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        I do you one better, why is Avatar!?
        1. R
          RedKingOfLust
          3 May 2021 21:04
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          I’ll do YOU one better, when is the Avatar??
      6. G
        Guest Guest
        5 May 2021 08:28
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        What the hell is this and why do I like it

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